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First: A very nice photo! To the composition: Good use of the rule of thirds - Maybe a little too much foreground and too little sky. T...

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First: A very nice photo!

To the composition: Good use of the rule of thirds - Maybe a little too much foreground and too little sky. The shadow of the ice block forms a beautiful angle with the ice block, as does the "water-free" part behind the ice block. Everything is very dynamic.

To the Technique: Frequently, I see very long or a very short exposure times with such photos. Here the slightly extended exposure time with the seemingly too little foreground produces the tension. But the lights could be a little more lighter.

Finally: I would hang it on the wall.

(I'm sorry for grammar mistakes)

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SiwySzczur Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016
Nice gallery:)
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nicoella Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the fav
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Ikarusthefirst Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Alles Gute zum Geburtstag!
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Standbildtechniker Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Student Photographer
Dankeschön!
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Ikarusthefirst Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Bitte! c:
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GsanePhotography Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the watch!
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Ragnar949 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Professional General Artist
Thank you
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Elfyah Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the fav!
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JAE462 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
dōmo arigatō gozaimasu
you are to kind, merci beaucoup :iconthanksforfav-fmr0:
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danielramosruiz Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the +fav .  A greeting.  Daniel

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